Dare to Read

May 9, 2011

Wanted: Loving, Caring Mother. Missing in Fairy Tales

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by Carmen Ferreiro-Esteban

When the children are the protagonists of the story, the mothers must go.

If you want to explore how different writers approach this subject in fantasy, check my post at The Enchanged Inkpot.


March 28, 2011

When the Characters Take Charge

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by Carmen Ferreiro-Esteban


If you ever had the eerie experience of having your characters talk back to you, and want to see how other writers dealt with their rebellious creations, please come and read my post (my first ever) at The Enchanted Inkpot.


Here’s the blurb for easy tweeting / posting:  Just because you made them up doesn’t mean you are in charge. See what happens When Your Characters Talk Back To You @EnchantedInkpot

August 16, 2009


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I love stories. That is why I’m a writer. And the story behind Kings, an NBC show that just ended its first season, is one of the best I have seen on TV in a long time.

            It’s the story of David, the shepherd boy who defeated the giant Goliath with a sling. A story most of us know from reading it in the Bible when we were children, but retold in a modern setting.

            Kings takes place in a country called Gilboa (Israel comes to mind) caught in an unending war with its northern neighbor Gath.

            The giant Goliah is a tank. And David is the young farmer turned soldier that blows up the tank in the pilot episode. He also rescues the king’s son and by doing so, is thrown into the web of intrigues of palace life, as he blindly at first, cautiously later, follows the orders of the king he worships. A king blessed by God to Whom he talks through rain and thunder. Until the day David comes. King Silas knows his time is over, but won’t step aside and will eventually defy God Itself to stay in power.

            Not only I find the story brilliant, the dialogue is smart and haunting.

            “We give up what we want when we want power,” King Silas tells his son, chewing the words and then spitting them in a pitch perfect delivery.        

            “The mother of the hero,” he tells David’s Mother.

            “The hero of my son,” David’s mother answers, returning her king’s stare unperturbed,

            “You can have whatever you want,” the king offers David, “even the proverbial half of my kingdom.” Then as the boy’s eyes fall on his daughter, “Half my kingdom it is.”

            There is not a simplistic distinction between good and evil in Kings. All the characters are written as complex human beings, from the wide eyed innocent Shepherd (David’s last name) to the queen’s nephew (a perfectly disturbing Culkin Macaulay of Home Alone fame).

            Kings is a fascinating story of greed and love, and trust and betrayal. It is storytelling at its best.

            If you write, if you want to write, or if you simply love a good story, watch Kings. It is available on line at NBC.com until September 20.

            And if you learn whether Kings has been renewed, please let me know.


Carmen Ferreiro-Esteban