by Carmen Ferreiro-Esteban
Here is my second attempt to write the query for my adult paranormal novel, Meet Becquer. This time I got it down to 89 words.
I don’t think this summary works as a query either. More like the copy for a book trailer?
He’s handsome, well-read, and can get you that book contract you always dreamed.
Never mind that he’s also an immortal and lives on human blood.
What would that matter?
Your relationship is strictly business.
Or so you thought.
Until Becquer’s life is threatened, and you discover that walking away is not an option.
Because he was hurt while protecting your son.
Because you are the only one who can save him now.
Because you care for him.
Welcome to Becquer’s world.
Please, come inside. He’s waiting for you.